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Pam McCarty's avatar

Hauntingly good. Thanks for sharing.

Diane Burley's avatar

The rhythm pulls you. Hauntingly beautiful, Lori.

Susan Compton's avatar

Great story and written with emotion. I really enjoyed it.

Nica Waters's avatar

Oh my goodness.

This is brilliant. Nicely done.

Barbara at Projectkin's avatar

Oh, wow, that's just what I needed, a feel-good story of haunting. 😮‍💨 Indeed, hauntingly beautiful.

Lori Olson White's avatar

Thanks, the original news story was so compelling I knew I wanted to try my hand at a fiction retelling. Eek 😱

Barbara at Projectkin's avatar

You're so good at this... You can tackle any story.

Lesley Lawson's avatar

Brilliant!